{"id":10734,"date":"2017-08-12T09:57:28","date_gmt":"2017-08-12T13:57:28","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/?p=10734"},"modified":"2017-08-12T09:57:28","modified_gmt":"2017-08-12T13:57:28","slug":"how-to-win-torture-the-language-and-muddle-the-story","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/?p=10734","title":{"rendered":"How to win: Torture the language and muddle the story"},"content":{"rendered":"<hr>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-1.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"1000\" height=\"676\" src=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-1.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-10735\" srcset=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-1.jpg 1000w, https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-1-300x203.jpg 300w, https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-1-768x519.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 709px) 85vw, (max-width: 909px) 67vw, (max-width: 1362px) 62vw, 840px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>I pay very little attention to the science fiction and fantasy publishing industry anymore. Almost every book I try to read, I end up flinging away in frustration after the first few pages. Almost no one knows how to write, and almost no one knows how to tell a story.<\/p>\n<p>Instead, what passes for &#8220;good writing&#8221; is innovation in quirkiness. Last night at the World Science Fiction Convention in Helsinki, the Hugo award for the best novel of 2017 was won by N.K. Jemisin for <em>The Obelisk Gate<\/em>. I have not read this novel, nor will I. Amazon&#8217;s &#8220;Look Inside&#8221; feature saves me a lot of money and time, because I can fling books without having to buy them.<\/p>\n<p>The quirk that Jemisin applied in <em>The Obelisk Gate<\/em> was to write the narrative in the second person, <em>and<\/em> in the present tense. And there is just enough dialogue in Amazon&#8217;s free sample to reveal that the characters are jerks who talk just like the here-and-now people in television&#8217;s meanest sitcoms.<\/p>\n<p>This is the kind of writing that will win you a Hugo these days:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-2.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"1000\" height=\"572\" src=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-2.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-10736\" srcset=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-2.jpg 1000w, https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-2-300x172.jpg 300w, https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-2-768x439.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 709px) 85vw, (max-width: 909px) 67vw, (max-width: 1362px) 62vw, 840px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>And this is the kind of characters and dialogue that will get you a Hugo these days: <\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-3.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"1000\" height=\"818\" src=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-3.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-10739\" srcset=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-3.jpg 1000w, https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-3-300x245.jpg 300w, https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/hugo-3-768x628.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 709px) 85vw, (max-width: 909px) 67vw, (max-width: 1362px) 62vw, 840px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Who am I protest? N.K. Jemisin sells lots of books, and I don&#8217;t. But I have to ask: Why does jerks arguing make good dialogue? I stand my ground: The best writing style is a style that the reader never even notices, a window into the story that is as transparent as possible. And though villains are necessary, there had better be some characters to fall in love with.<\/p>\n<p>Here&#8217;s yet another Hugo winner that will be completely forgotten, and good riddance, before the pages have started turning yellow. <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I pay very little attention to the science fiction and fantasy publishing industry anymore. Almost every book I try to read, I end up flinging away in frustration after the first few pages. Almost no one knows how to write, and almost no one knows how to tell a story. Instead, what passes for &#8220;good &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/?p=10734\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;How to win: Torture the language and muddle the story&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[2,22],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-10734","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-culture","category-literature"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10734","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=10734"}],"version-history":[{"count":20,"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10734\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":10757,"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10734\/revisions\/10757"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=10734"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=10734"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/acornabbey.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=10734"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}